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Team Moonlight Scene 2 by ChaosAngel5 Team Moonlight Scene 2 by ChaosAngel5
The Second Scene in my Sonic Heroes Comic. As you can see, this is the scene before the battle with another team in Grand Metropolis. The background was really hard to do. I had to keep going back to the cutscenes in the game to get it right ^^;

Anyway, this is Team Moonlight fighting with Team Treble. The next scene will be after the fight with Eggman in Rail Canyon.

Team Treble (c) :iconsonicinterface:
Team Moonlight (c) :iconchaosangel5:

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:iconacidicstudios:
acidicstudios Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2009
I hated fighting team rose there, it was god annoying D| lol

:3 nice comic
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:iconchaosangel5:
ChaosAngel5 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2009
Lol, yeah ^^
Thank you ^^
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:iconacidicstudios:
acidicstudios Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2009
: D yush XD
no prob ^^
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:iconojamalio:
Ojamalio Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2009
Cool
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:iconchaosangel5:
ChaosAngel5 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2009
Thanks
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:iconojamalio:
Ojamalio Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2009
xD
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:icondiloshstar:
Diloshstar Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Great job!
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:iconchaosangel5:
ChaosAngel5 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2009
Thank you ^^
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:icondiloshstar:
Diloshstar Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome!
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:iconburninghart:
Burninghart Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2009
It looks good, but the fifth panel kinda confused me... it looked like Sky was talking first. Always keep the first speaker's balloon to the left of the panel in a left-to-right format, and to the right in a right-to-left format.
Other than that one panel, this is a great comic! Drat, I know you're probably going to be done with all of these by the time I get back to dA, but do you think you'd be able to do one with my team, too?
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:iconchaosangel5:
ChaosAngel5 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2009
Lol, yeah. I actually had a big problem with that when I first started drawing comics. I did try with that panel, by putting Ozone's speach at the top and Sky's at the bottom, but I guess I could've done better ^^;

Sorry, the other position is already filled.
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:iconburninghart:
Burninghart Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2009
Lol, oh well. But I guess maybe I'll make one myself when I get my characters drawn... ^^

Anyway, Here's a quick tip for writing manga/comics: When the speech bubbles are easily ready out-of-order, then it's okay to bend the rules a little bit and change things up. The most important thing with the speech bubbles is to make them quick-to-read and understandable. Which, you had the "understandable" part down well, but there were a couple of points in there where I had to go back and make sure I'd read them in the right order.

But then again, I'm just a dreamer who's only comic ever made so far was a low-quality junk heap that only utilized chibis, with no color or shading... So I probably don't really have any room to talk, heh heh... ^^;
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:iconchaosangel5:
ChaosAngel5 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2009
Yeah, sorry 'bout that. But let me tell you, it's a LOT better than my old comics ^^;
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:iconburninghart:
Burninghart Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2009
crap, I meant "read", not "ready"... XD
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:iconfinalo:
FinaLo Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2009
Awesome!Great poses!:D
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:iconchaosangel5:
ChaosAngel5 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2009
Thankies ^^
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:iconfinalo:
FinaLo Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2009
You're welcome!:D
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:icontruemidnightblue:
truemidnightblue Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2009
Awesome! ^^
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:iconchaosangel5:
ChaosAngel5 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2009
Thanks ^^
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:icontruemidnightblue:
truemidnightblue Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2009
Your welcome.

By the way. Did you get my reply to that note?
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:iconchaosangel5:
ChaosAngel5 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2009
Oops! Yep, I did, just been so busy with other stuffs ^^; Shall do it now!
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:icontruemidnightblue:
truemidnightblue Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2009
thank goodness. I was worried that the spot was going to another team D: (I worry too much like that)
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:iconchaosangel5:
ChaosAngel5 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2009
Don't worry, the spot is yours ^^
BTW, would you like to enter my contest? [link]
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:icontruemidnightblue:
truemidnightblue Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2009
Huzzaah! *crazy pose*
Sure I would c:
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:iconchaosangel5:
ChaosAngel5 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2009
Lol, thankies ^^
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:icontwistedlove1243:
twistedlove1243 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey could my team be in it?
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:iconchaosangel5:
ChaosAngel5 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2009
Sorry, the other position is already filled
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:icontwistedlove1243:
twistedlove1243 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
oh ok...Lol are you doing another series liek this after your done?
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:iconsonicinterface:
sonicinterface Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2009
If it makes you feel any better, Team Treble needs an opposing team for the battle in Frog Forest. Interested?
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:icontwistedlove1243:
twistedlove1243 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
YES PLEASE....

Espion:Purple lynx(looks like tails) with a kind heart but can fight like a madman.used to work for dr robotnik and is inner robot like shadow.

Jem:Purple lynx like espion and is also his wife.Robot iners worked for the doctor powerful and wield as chainsaw.She has a ponytail

Sapphire:Purple lynx who blows people up with atomic blast she has braids and is the daughter of jem and espion
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:iconsonicinterface:
sonicinterface Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2009
Um... that doesn't tell me anything I need to know. What are their positions in the team (speed, flight, power)? And what are their personalities like?
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twistedlove1243 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
OHH Jem is speed

Espion is Power

Sapphire is flight.

Espion:Nice,but very serious about fighting.And hates anyone who threatens him.

Jem:Very hostile but nice to the people on her good side.

Sapphire:Nice,Serious,Sometimes humorous
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:iconsonicinterface:
sonicinterface Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2009
Right. What matters is the cut-scene right before the battle. I'll send you a note with a sample script, and you'll tell me if I got anything wrong. How does that sound?
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:iconchaosangel5:
ChaosAngel5 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2009
I...might. But I' not making any promises.
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:icontwistedlove1243:
twistedlove1243 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
did u see my character application for consience
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:iconchaosangel5:
ChaosAngel5 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2009
No, where is it?
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:iconlshcd:
LSHCD Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2009   Writer
Thomas: Heh, Hunter sure knows how to start a fight ^^
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:iconchaosangel5:
ChaosAngel5 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2009
Sky: *sigh* Hunter, what have yo got us into this time?
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:iconlshcd:
LSHCD Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2009   Writer
Aldan: he is always starting some sort of fight isn't he?

Thomas: Normally I prefer not to fight. But I will if it means saving the world.
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:iconchaosangel5:
ChaosAngel5 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2009
Sky: :nod:
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:iconsonicinterface:
sonicinterface Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2009
Not a bad job. I've got plans for the Bullet Station scene myself, but this scene comes first.
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:iconchaosangel5:
ChaosAngel5 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2009
Thanks. Are you planning to write this scene up yourself, or will you just use this comic for the Grand Metropolis scene?
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:iconsonicinterface:
sonicinterface Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2009
You'll see.
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:iconchaosangel5:
ChaosAngel5 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2009
Cool
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:iconsonicinterface:
sonicinterface Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2009
Have you found another team for Team Moonlight to fight in Frog Forest yet?
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:iconchaosangel5:
ChaosAngel5 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2009
Yep ^^
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:iconanubissa:
Anubissa Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Cool :thumbsup:
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:iconchaosangel5:
ChaosAngel5 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2009
thanks ^^
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:iconsonicthebitch:
Sonicthebitch Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2009
nice. teams ?
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:iconchaosangel5:
ChaosAngel5 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2009
Thanks ^^ Hunter the wolf, Sky the dog and Dusk the moth are team Moonlight. Ozone the pangolin, Copper the bull and Mythril the pegasus are Team Treble.
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